Well, what do we have here?
That, my friend, was pretty damn good.
You could improve a bit more, pratice your skills with your mouse or that thing that is a pencil, although I forgot the name.
This was a very good flash, I enjoyed it.
Graphics - You could improve alot on this, maybe try black out lines instead of LF's style of flash characters, see how that goes, if you don't like it, you can do as you please, not saying you havto, I mean, It's a suggestion.
Style - Well, your style of these things are very interesting, so I don't really have much to say here, sorry.
Sound - What was that language they wher speaking? Gnomish? Spanish? French? I don't know, never heard of such a voice. And maybe but some better music, not really all what you need there.
Violence - Wacking the gnomes with his giant hammer? Well, Id have to say, making the Gnomes fly is violent, not much to say.
Humor- Oh the big ooonee, The Play Succuba was that most interesting things ive seen in this. Id get my own damn copy of that. The Cookie dealing part, wow, I laughed pretty hard on that, considering he offered only one more cookie, and also got wacked twice. And the MISS part on Ragnaros, I just had to let out the humor.
Overall - A worthy flash! Not front page worthy, but hey, it's better then the crap ass submissions ive seen lately! Youve done a very good job here, I appluad you.